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Feedback from peers

Anders, Clark

"How does the door work?"

"I like the "light ball" idea"

"First system is more like scenario."

"What fixes the cup that is suppose to hold the tent?"

"Is it possible to make a breathing fabric that doesn't let sound through?"

"Could you wake up by vibrations in the mattress."

"Your boss, what does that mean?"

"Could your system also indicate time of day and who that does what?"

"Does the bathroom need to be in the system?"

"Use renderings to show the packing and unpacking of the tent. More believable."

"A bit labour intensive."

"Show your research on how long a power nap should last."

"Good flexible system."

"Good use of free space, and smart packing of the modules."

Some of the feedback from tutor

"Design a structure for the tent to collapse in the right way."

"I like the simplicity."

"Maybe look at ways to add more benefits."

"Add more details to your design: How the hook is attached, how is it cleaned, change batteries, ventilation, mattress etc."

"Show how the door works."

"Show all stakeholders in system map."

"Maybe show locations of possible night clubs to put it."

Reflection

For next week I'll work more with the details in my design. Look into the details that strengthens the overall design: Decide what fabrics I'm using, how it collapses, structure, how the blanket, sheets and matress look, add branding, change batteries, how the door works etc.